Comments on: I am looking into your eyes

By: Mathilda Dwi Lestari

Mathilda Dwi Lestari — Thu, 04 Jun 2009 07:33:11 +0000

yeah. that’s right. even after we met then we had to go back home, feels like something is missing like a part of your heart is gone with and feel the emptiness.

By: Mathilda Dwi Lestari

Mathilda Dwi Lestari — Thu, 04 Jun 2009 07:28:49 +0000

I am looking into your eyes and I see all that I loved before long ago

when we promised to love each other always.

We have travelled far and sometimes alone.

Did you remember what we had said back then?

i love those lines. feels like im on it right now.

By: lookingforbeauty

lookingforbeauty — Wed, 02 Apr 2008 05:58:09 +0000

I remember a long ago love.
He’s married to my best friend from then.
Somewhere midway in our separate lives
we kissed and knew we had always loved
and always will, though we married others.
The electricity is on a dimmer switch, on low,
when we meet. The undercurrent will never go.
Though he lives half a world away,
we know.

Your lines triggered that memory, that feeling, those goosebumps just hovering beneath the skin.
K

By: Melly

Melly — Fri, 07 Mar 2008 14:34:03 +0000

I am in poetry mode now. Let me give you a line..

“It was love that kept us,
And it was also love that separated us,
Love is really fragile,
And what lies between is merely honesty”

Honesty is the medium for love, and ego comes in between honesty. Ok… I am out of topic. hahahah

Nice work. Thanks as always Mel

By: bitchyangel

bitchyangel — Wed, 05 Mar 2008 14:53:29 +0000

“Did you ever think I would forget you or never want to cherish you again?”

Love that line. Hope and then expecting to be disappointed at the end. You write well. Thank you for giving me another reason to write.

Thank you. I do hope that that the poem comes across as optimistic (I guess it depends on the readers answers to the semi-rhetorical questions being asked) and readers are are left with the idea that renewal/a new start is a realistic option.

Many thanks for a thought provoking comment and best of luck with your own writing.

Regards

David Raho

By: valiko75

valiko75 — Wed, 05 Mar 2008 14:06:04 +0000

Why do we realize so many things about our personal relationship only when we are far apart? .. Thanks for the sincerity in your lines..

Far apart in distance or time. I have a theory, and it seems to be supported by recent research into the effects of endorphins and oxytocin on our thoughts and emotions, that we become a little bit addicted to people and crave to be with them. Will we ever have an adequate scientific explanation for the complex web of emotions that make up human bonding?

Regards

David

By: roopess

roopess — Wed, 05 Mar 2008 13:03:05 +0000

Really nice.. tried to feel.. felt a bit too. enjoyed reading . “I have never stopped loving you for a second.” Nice line…

Thank you. It is all about feeling and sometimes in our lives we feel so much it is hard to put it down in words. Glad you felt a bit too.

David Raho